• An-ideal-world-poem contest 3CE

    Vote for your favourite poem and explain you choice in the comments.

     POEM n°1

     My ideal world is a world where people aren’t bad.

    A world which is funny, a world that isn’t sad.

     

    A planet where everyone is treated the same.

    A planet that doesn’t fight and a planet that has no shame.

     

    A planet of people who want peace in the world.

    A planet of people who respect the world and who take care of it.

     

    A world which doesn’t know any wars.

    A world in everyone is equal.

     

    POEM n°2

    My ideal world is a world where racism doesn’t exist,

    A world which considers everyone like siblings.

     

    A humanity whose homosexuality isn’t on the black list,

    A universe where humans have got feelings.

     

    Full of people whose ideas are for developement,

    People who are proud to be different.

     

    Somewhere that I can dream without limit.

    A place where hope reigns, I want it.

     

    But our world is a gamble.

    Either you win, or you crumble.

     

    POEM n°3

    My ideal world is a world which is tolerant.

    A world where people are respectful and people who don’t use abusive language.

     

    A world in which I can believe

    And not with leaders whose policies are tyrannical.

     

    A  world where war and corruption are not everywhere.

    A world that respects democracy and humans.

     

    With people who can love eachother with any religion.

    And not with people that are scared by someone who is different.

     

    Because this world is unbearable

    When I see them destroying the planet and when I see some of them who are rejected.

     

    POEM n°4

    My ideal world is a world where everybody is accepted and where racism is not.

    A world where all the people are happy,

     

    Where everyone lives in peace.

    A world where all the dreams become reality

    Where I can be me without being judged by anybody.

     

    A planet that doesn’t fight.

    A planet that has no shame.

     

    A place with people who are young and free

    And who can remain like this.

     

    A world where liberty reigns

    And which is beautiful.

     

    POEM n°5

    My ideal world is a world whose inhabitants are nice

    A world which accepts and a world which doesn’t do wars.

     

    Beaches where there are pink dolpins.

    A place with people who love and that are peaceful.

     

    Somewhere criminals do not exist.

    People whose life would be fine.

    Because I love years when there are no battles.

     

    A place where it is hot and beautiful.

    A world that is perfect.

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  • Comments

    1
    lucas RN
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 12:52

    I like very much the thirst because he has a very beautiful melody,the rhymes are very good select and It's very enjoyable to read it. 

    2
    Maurine51
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 13:44

    POEM N1

    3
    Mathilde30
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 13:46

    POEM 1, it's the best ! 

    4
    toinoulefou
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 15:05

    cool !!!^^

    5
    Paulettelovesenglish Paulettelovesenglish profile
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:04

    @Lucas : the first (1st) or the third (3rd) one?  "he'? Is the poem a human?

    6
    Paulettelovesenglish Paulettelovesenglish profile
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:05

    @Maurine51 : why have you chosen the first one? Could you give a reason?

    7
    Paulettelovesenglish Paulettelovesenglish profile
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:06

    @toinoulefou : I agree with you. It's cool! But could you vote for your favourite poem now?

    8
    CD
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:20

    Well, they're all very interesting, it is difficult to choose. Well done to all of you!

    9
    Lucie02
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:46

    I like the poem 1 because it is the one who define more my ideal world.

    10
    Paulettelovesenglish Paulettelovesenglish profile
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 20:26

    @Lucie02 : "It's the poem ......... ('who') looks like my ideal world."

    Who can find the right pronoun?

    11
    paul51
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 17:10

    poeme 1 it's the best

    12
    Yann 51
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:20

    Poeme number 1

    I like very much because  it's rhymes are beautiful and this poem is joyful !

     

    13
    Yann 51
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:22

    I love this poem because it's rhymes are beautiful, It's very enjoyable to read it and this poem is joyful!!!!

    14
    Justine15
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:23

     l like a first poem because it's just my world perfect.

    15
    Paulettelovesenglish Paulettelovesenglish profile
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 20:42

    @Yann 51 : "it's rhymes"? You mean "its", I suppose.

    16
    Maaelys
    Thursday 6th December 2012 at 21:04

    I vote for the poem 1 because he's original, interesting and I think the same thing for having an ideal world.

    17
    Silverium
    Friday 7th December 2012 at 20:06

    I vote for any poem because they're all beautiful : otherwise, they wouldn't be on the blog. :)

    18
    nassim boulmi
    Sunday 9th December 2012 at 20:35

    poeme 4 because is good :)

    19
    Yann 51
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 15:10

    Paulettelovesenglish:yes I meant it!

    20
    MaurineA
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 20:23

    Poem n°4

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