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An-ideal-world-poem contest 3CE
Vote for your favourite poem and explain you choice in the comments.
POEM n°1
My ideal world is a world where people aren’t bad.
A world which is funny, a world that isn’t sad.
A planet where everyone is treated the same.
A planet that doesn’t fight and a planet that has no shame.
A planet of people who want peace in the world.
A planet of people who respect the world and who take care of it.
A world which doesn’t know any wars.
A world in everyone is equal.
POEM n°2
My ideal world is a world where racism doesn’t exist,
A world which considers everyone like siblings.
A humanity whose homosexuality isn’t on the black list,
A universe where humans have got feelings.
Full of people whose ideas are for developement,
People who are proud to be different.
Somewhere that I can dream without limit.
A place where hope reigns, I want it.
But our world is a gamble.
Either you win, or you crumble.
POEM n°3
My ideal world is a world which is tolerant.
A world where people are respectful and people who don’t use abusive language.
A world in which I can believe
And not with leaders whose policies are tyrannical.
A world where war and corruption are not everywhere.
A world that respects democracy and humans.
With people who can love eachother with any religion.
And not with people that are scared by someone who is different.
Because this world is unbearable
When I see them destroying the planet and when I see some of them who are rejected.
POEM n°4
My ideal world is a world where everybody is accepted and where racism is not.
A world where all the people are happy,
Where everyone lives in peace.
A world where all the dreams become reality
Where I can be me without being judged by anybody.
A planet that doesn’t fight.
A planet that has no shame.
A place with people who are young and free
And who can remain like this.
A world where liberty reigns
And which is beautiful.
POEM n°5
My ideal world is a world whose inhabitants are nice
A world which accepts and a world which doesn’t do wars.
Beaches where there are pink dolpins.
A place with people who love and that are peaceful.
Somewhere criminals do not exist.
People whose life would be fine.
Because I love years when there are no battles.
A place where it is hot and beautiful.
A world that is perfect.
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2Maurine51Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 13:443Mathilde30Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 13:464toinoulefouWednesday 5th December 2012 at 15:058CDWednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:209Lucie02Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:46@Lucie02 : "It's the poem ......... ('who') looks like my ideal world."
Who can find the right pronoun?
11paul51Thursday 6th December 2012 at 17:1012Yann 51Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:20Poeme number 1
I like very much because it's rhymes are beautiful and this poem is joyful !
13Yann 51Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:22I love this poem because it's rhymes are beautiful, It's very enjoyable to read it and this poem is joyful!!!!
14Justine15Thursday 6th December 2012 at 19:2316MaaelysThursday 6th December 2012 at 21:04I vote for the poem 1 because he's original, interesting and I think the same thing for having an ideal world.
17SilveriumFriday 7th December 2012 at 20:06I vote for any poem because they're all beautiful : otherwise, they wouldn't be on the blog. :)
18nassim boulmiSunday 9th December 2012 at 20:3519Yann 51Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 15:1020MaurineAThursday 13rd December 2012 at 20:2321ShanuSunday 15th July 2018 at 06:44I want To tell you that you Are writing poems much good but from my idea you have to write on your world because you live on this world
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I like very much the thirst because he has a very beautiful melody,the rhymes are very good select and It's very enjoyable to read it.