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An-ideal-world-poem contest 3F
Vote for your favourite poem and explain you choice in the comments.
POEM N°1
My ideal world is a world where I could fly,
A world where people that I love never die.
A place where there is no winter.
A place which could welcome all the lovers.
Birds whose songs are pleasant and joyful.
Birds which are innocent and colourful.
Full of people who don’t care about money.
People who are young, free and happy.
POEM N°2
My ideal world is a world that is soothing, where birds sing wonderful melodies.
Somewhere I can hear the lapping of waves and the cries of gulls.
A place which is crossed by a light navy breeze and which comes with the horns of boats.
Somewhere I can see the mainsails which go to sea.
A world that doesn’t judge by appearances.
A world that is populated of people whose harmony is good.
A place where mocking, persecutions, racism and violence don’t exist.
A world whose safety is the main concern, somewhere everybody could be safe.
I want a better world ; I want people who are afraid of the world to live without fears.
POEM N°3
My ideal world is a world where there isn’t any violence.
A world where racism has no existence.
A place where people are happy.
A place which is lovely.
Cities whose buildings have no degradation.
Cities whose environment has no pollution.
Somewhere that makes everyone rich.
Somewhere all objectives are easy to reach.
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Comments
2Virgile.Tuesday 11st December 2012 at 19:033Margot!Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 13:314Adele*Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 16:005-Laure.Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:00I prefer the second poem because it's the deepest in my opinion and it's very melodious.6Flavian123Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:46I prefer the poem number three because there are beautiful rhymes but the others are nice too.
7Hugo~Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:548josselin :)Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:569Roxane!Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 21:49103 ValentineThursday 13rd December 2012 at 12:01I would vote for the second poem because, to my mind, there are more vocabulary researches than in the orthers. Furthermore, this poem corresponds to my ideal world!
11Alicia.mThursday 13rd December 2012 at 17:0612Philippine!Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 17:5313-FantineThursday 13rd December 2012 at 18:5714-Lucie.Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 19:0915Lola*Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 19:56I prefer the number one because it's the nicer. The topics of the other don't really touched me.
16Mélaine/JrThursday 13rd December 2012 at 22:2417Aubane03Sunday 16th December 2012 at 20:3818Cécile!Monday 17th December 2012 at 17:58I prefer the 3 poem because there are rythme
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I like number 2 and 3 because they show that their author cares for the society and the environment they live in.