• An-ideal-world-poem contest 3F

    Written by Paulettelovesenglish in LITERATURE on 1 December 2012 à 20:59

    Vote for your favourite poem and explain you choice in the comments.

    POEM N°1

    My ideal world is a world where I could fly,

    A world where people that I love never die.

     

    A place where there is no winter.

    A place which could welcome all the lovers.

     

    Birds whose songs are pleasant and joyful.

    Birds which are innocent and colourful.

     

    Full of people who don’t care about money.

    People who are young, free and happy.

     

    POEM N°2

    My ideal world is a world that is soothing, where birds sing wonderful melodies.

    Somewhere I can hear the lapping of waves and the cries of gulls.

     

    A place which is crossed by a light navy breeze and which comes with the horns of boats.

    Somewhere I can see the mainsails which go to sea.

     

    A world that doesn’t judge by appearances.

    A world that is populated of people whose harmony is good.

     

    A place where mocking, persecutions, racism and violence don’t exist.

    A world whose safety is the main concern, somewhere everybody could be safe.

    I want a better world ; I want people who are afraid of the world to live without fears.

     

    POEM N°3

    My ideal world is a world where there isn’t any violence.

    A world  where racism has no existence.

     

    A place where people are happy.

    A place which is lovely.

     

    Cities whose buildings have no degradation.

    Cities whose environment has no pollution.

     

    Somewhere that makes everyone rich.

    Somewhere all objectives are easy to reach.

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    CD
    Wednesday 5th December 2012 at 18:18

    I like number 2 and 3 because they show that their author cares for the society and the environment they live in.

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    Virgile.
    Tuesday 11st December 2012 at 19:03

    I think each one sounds right. They're harmonious, rythmed and very nice!

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    Margot!
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 13:31

    I prefer the poem number 1 because I think he poem is great ! 

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    Adele*
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 16:00

    I like the poem number one because there are rhymes and there are ideas I like

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    -Laure.
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:00
    I prefer the second poem because it's the deepest in my opinion and it's very melodious.
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    Flavian123
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:46

    I prefer the poem number three because there are beautiful rhymes but the others are nice too.

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    Hugo~
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:54

    I prefer the first poem because he is rythmed.

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    josselin :)
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 17:56

    I like the third poem because it talks about a better world.

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    Roxane!
    Wednesday 12nd December 2012 at 21:49

    I prefer the third poem because there are rhymes and he deals with pollution and racism

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    3 Valentine
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 12:01

    I would vote for the second poem because, to my mind, there are more vocabulary researches than in the orthers. Furthermore, this poem corresponds to my ideal world!

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    Alicia.m
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 17:06

    I prefer the poem number three because it is the most beautiful and nice


     

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    Philippine!
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 17:53

    I prefer the first because it's nice and (for me) better than the other

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    -Fantine
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 18:57

    I prefer the poeme number 3 because they are rhyme and it is butiful.

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    -Lucie.
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 19:09

    I prefer the third because is maybe simpler than the others but it is the most tuneful !!

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    Lola*
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 19:56

    I prefer the number one because it's the nicer. The topics of the other don't really touched me.

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    Mélaine/Jr
    Thursday 13rd December 2012 at 22:24

    I prefer the first one because it's very rythmed and it's the best for me

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    Aubane03
    Sunday 16th December 2012 at 20:38

    I prefer the third because it is simple and beautiful at a time

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    Cécile!
    Monday 17th December 2012 at 17:58
    I prefer the 3 poem because there are rythme
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